"No, I don't thank you for the fish at all" (notindetroit)
05/24/2016 at 12:26 • Filed to: None
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"No, I don't thank you for the fish at all" (notindetroit)
05/24/2016 at 12:26 • Filed to: None | 0
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Just yeah, and such.
luvMeSome142 & some Lincoln!
> No, I don't thank you for the fish at all
05/24/2016 at 12:30 |
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Why? Is it your ad?
RamblinRover Luxury-Yacht
> No, I don't thank you for the fish at all
05/24/2016 at 12:31 |
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Seems a little overpriced for what it is, but I know bupkis about what one pays for an 8yo generic-brand demi-cruiser with a big engine.
Takuro Spirit
> No, I don't thank you for the fish at all
05/24/2016 at 12:38 |
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Its a motorbikle
Nibbles
> No, I don't thank you for the fish at all
05/24/2016 at 17:13 |
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It has good information and is minimal on the typographical errors, despite lack of punctuation. However, with the ad being completely list-formatted, it leaves something to be desired in the overall approach. A paragraph about the motorcycle’s history, and maybe a brief explanation of the fairing damage, would be nice. The pictures are decent. They’re well-intended, however they don’t showcase the motorcycle’s better features. Less close-ups would be a good thing to have.
I give this ad a passing grade. Points taken for the format; points given for being in the 85th percentile for grammar.